Could you help me with your opinions here?
Dear Friend,
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Dear Friend,
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As you all know I get my inspirations for my poems from things I read, see, hear or do. And today I was reading, http://vrun.wordpress.com/2009/11/10/i-empathise/ and wondered.
This is my response opinion:
Deluding yet Demystifying,
Dreadful yet Timid,
The feeling of the mind,
BEHOLD In emotions is lipid.
Once thought this sounded toothsome,
And now its burning within,
Why do I feel like a sack of smileys?
Am I not made of Flesh n Skin?
The sleep without dreams,
The Barrel without Beer,
The feeling of loneliness,
Sorrow without the tear,
Leaves me pondering,
Is this what I've got in store?
Will life give another territory,
For me to explore?
Blowing my windpipe with all the nicotine,
Flowing with the air, breathing it in,
Filling my lungs with the cloud of smoke,
And drowning it in with a dash of coke.
Everyone has their dark little secrets,
Eveyone are living with stealth spades,
When shows on TV start stripping us naked,
Is when wrath and fury cascade.
There is love and hatred between any two,
Everyone hates to face defeat,
Even if it from kith n kin,
None takes it sitting in his seat.
Bringing out the differences is disturbing,
It causes more than just harmony errosion,
We aam janta, the mango people,
Cant live life without suspicion.
When we loose ground of the truth to false,
And are made to face our inner devil,
Its pain and tears to all that take hurt,
As the accused is going through every peril.
That's why my friend, the wise men say,
Take life in your stride, it aint smooth sail,
You have to expect the unexpected and smile,
As every damn color has its pale.
Tender feet, Soft blue eyes,
A giggle, a touch, a glitter bright,
The kick, the push, oh! so sweet,
A soft pink blush on the cheeks.
Just like this is our love today,
Humble, innocent, in its own little way,
It feels like we met, just yesterday,
And yet we grew together, everyday.
We had our grins, our baby smiles,
The grumpy face, the pillow fights,
My hair you pulled, Your face I scratched,
We fought, I cribbed, "what a lousy match!"
Grown-ups? Yes, yet children at heart,
Showing off and acting smart,
The gifts you showered, to the WOW on my lips,
The blush in my eyes, You deserved that kiss.
You are the sweetest charm I have met,
I owe you more than these pretty gifts,
I am so glad today, we are an year together,
I truly wish, this moment last forever.